Friday, April 4, 2008

MY LIFE IS......

POEM 5
MY LIFE IS SAD BECAUSE IM
ALWAYS MAD
LIKE WHEN FAMILY MEMBERS DIE I
CONTINUE TO CRY
MY LIFE IS LIKE A GIANT PUZZLE WITH PIECES MISSING
JUST LIKE WHEN FAMILY START DISSING
MY LIFE IS LIKE A FAIRY TALE
CAN YOU TELL
ALL THE FAKE PEOPLE
AND ALL THE WANNA BE KEEPERS
YOU THINK YOU KNOW WHAT MY LIFE IS ABOUT
BUT YOU HAVE NO DOUBT
DONT PAY ATTENTION LIKE IM INVISIBLE
JUST KNOW IM BENDABLE
NOW YOU KNOW WHAT MY LIFE IS ABOUT
SO I DARE YOU TO SHARE WHAT I CARE
simile :line 7
simile:3
metaphor:9&10
simile:5

1 comment:

G. Latman said...

Good use of similes to emphasize your ideas.