Friday, April 18, 2008

POEM 3
IVE BEEN BEATEN,BROKEN,AND BATTERED
ILL NEVER BE THE SAME THEY'RE THE ONES TO BLAME
I'VE HAD FEARS AND MANY TEARS
MY HEART IS FLOODING WITH BLOOD IF I ONLY HAD UNDERSTOOD
MY SADNESS IS LIKE FLAMES COMING OUT OF A FIRE
MY LIFE HAS NO AIR IN IT LIKE IM ON A FLAT TIRE

1 comment:

G. Latman said...

Good use of figurative language, especially the similes in the last two lines.